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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:06 pm

[By the way, once you've written your post. I suggest you read it over once to check for typos etc. There is no rush to get your post .. posted. And correct grammar is more respectable when people are reading it. ]


With a flick of his wrist, Pesadilla swung his blade down around his body, to clash with the attacking blade. Pesadilla lightly jumped into the air away from the Shinigami. Whilst travelling through the air, slowly, he rotated his body to face Jinn and raised his free hand. With a flash of Red light, he projected a Bala from his fingertips straight towards Jinn.

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:17 pm

[I do xD but i also use google for the correct spelling on words im not sure on if theres anything majorly bad then just OOC tell me cos if i dont see it when i re read then i wont know if youd be so kind xD]

Jinn crouched as the blades clashed lowering his centre of gravity, whilst he watched the Demonicly powerful arrncar point his finger he knew he'd seen a similar type of attack , knowing his sealed blade wouldnt be bale to deflect it fully he charged his reitatsu into his blade, and said "Cleanse Him, KAJIRYUU!" With that said Jinn toke the blades grip in both hands and let his reitatsu burst free with exictement of a strong fight. The zanpaktous blade now shot full body length and double the width. Kajiryuus Reitatsu and Jinns combined and set free now weigh the air down enough for the average opponent to feel a bit slower but whether or not this opponent would feel it was in th lap of the gods. As the bala was inches away from Jinn he manouvered the heafty blade as if it was a child stick and said "BURN!" as the bala conected with the well timed command the reitatsu around the entire of the blade ignited into a furious inferno which mimicked a dragon biting up as it errupted into the air, the flame carried on down the hilt and surrounded Jinn in a small fire sheild only small big enough to burn a wound closed


[All checked and i cant see any spelling mistakes your welcome to check google if you think so]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:18 pm

With another sharp, high-pitched sound, Pesadilla dissapeared. Within a fraction of a second, Pesadilla appeared infront of Jinn with his blade swinging down upon his head with great speed.
As the blade was only a centimetre away from impacting upon Jinn, Pesadilla once again dissapeared. Reappearing behind Jinn, Pesadilla launched his foot up to the side of the Shinigami's head.

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:58 pm

Jinn manourved his blad eto try and divert the bladed attack but before he could move his blade into place to deflect the arrancars blade it wasgone. Luckily by now Jinns left elbow was near the arrancars foot. Jinn darted his eyes round to see the foot coming to him. He let go of the blade with his right hand and moves his left arm so the elbow and forearm and biceps became one bit ehild with a slight gap.

Using that gap Jinn shot his right hand through at powerful speed to grab the Arrancars ankle. The speed of which Jinns hand was moving was uncanny as he crouched down to lower his centre of gravity incase he needed to swing his mighty blade round for a bladed attack by the arrnacar. As he crouched he made sure that the right hand was headed for the foot that almost was on his left arm made sheild.


Jinn smiled at the speed of the arrancar and of this battle and said cockily "Still not going to tell me your name Arrancar - Kun" Jinn then laughed heartily towards the arrancars lack of convosation with the shinigami he once underestimated.

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:11 pm

[ Alright, I don't see any reason why this fight should last any longer. Just for the sake of filling the position, I will probably give you the rank you want. But I'd like either Kira and Xinj to give their opinion before i just give it to you. ]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:18 pm

[well i asked for minimum 5th seat but i fought as hard as i could and asked if i deserve better than i would hope i would get it, not just throwing 5th at me to shut me up. Xinj i havnt seen in a while mind xD]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:25 pm

[ I, Personally think Rank 4 would be good for you. Meaning, Rank-Wise, You're one Rank below Diaku. ]


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[ Yeah, I'm changing your rank to 4. I don't think I'll be getting a Second Opinion Anytime soon. ]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:28 pm

["/ had expected higher xD but fine as you wish]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:29 pm

Hobopew wrote:
["/ had expected higher xD but fine as you wish]



[Yes, I had a feeling you would expect Higher xD]

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PostSubject: Re: Jinn Nialo- 4th seat   Tue Jul 29, 2008 3:30 pm

[Well diaku said i was near his level xD and hes going for captain so i wonder if he will get it or maybe just leuit xD]

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